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Chapter 12 - CHAPTER 12 : OVERTAKING

 Inside the black void within Hazel's consciousness...

"You are finally here," a strange voice echoed, breaking the silence.

"Who are you? Who is speaking?" Hazel asked, a tremor of unease in his voice, though fear was surprisingly absent.

A figure emerged from the shadows, stepping into Hazel's view.

"You!" A surge of anger coursed through Hazel as he recognized the figure. It was the Grim Reaper who had pursued Ivy.

"Why are you here?" Hazel demanded, his hatred for the reaper palpable.

"Oh, nothing much," the reaper replied with a playful shrug. "Just decided to tag along with the one who so rudely relieved me of my existence."

"Why were you after Ivy's life? What did she ever do to you?" Hazel pressed, his anger hardening into a burning resolve.

"Well, it's not exactly my fault she stumbled into this dimension. It's forbidden, you see," the reaper explained casually.

"What do you mean, 'this dimension'?" Hazel asked, his confusion growing.

"You think this is the only one?" the reaper chuckled, a hint of amusement in his tone. "There are countless dimensions out there. Your dimension was the last one to be visited by the System. That's why it's forbidden for beings from other dimensions to come here before the System's arrival."

"Wait," Hazel interjected, trying to process the information. "You said you were forbidden from coming before the System visited. So, in other words, you're saying people from other dimensions will be coming here now that the System is here?"

"Bingo," the reaper confirmed with a nod. "That's precisely what I mean."

"Well, forget all that for now," the reaper said, his playful demeanor shifting slightly as he summoned his scythe. "The main reason I'm here is to give you this."

"What do you mean? I have mine," Hazel said, gesturing to his spectral dual scythes.

"Oh, come on," the reaper scoffed. "Did you really think that was the real deal?"

"Luckily for you," the reaper continued, a grin spreading across his face, "you actually managed to fill your soul points before you kicked the bucket. Otherwise, you'd be genuinely dead." He chuckled again.

"What are you talking about?" Hazel asked, his disbelief growing.

"The requirement to use soul points," the reaper explained, his eyes twinkling, "is to die."

"Wait... what? How is that even possible?" Hazel stammered, utterly bewildered.

"Whatever," the reaper waved his hand dismissively. "Just take it and leave." He tossed his scythe towards Hazel, who instinctively caught it. The weapon felt strangely familiar yet imbued with a power he hadn't felt before.

[Requirements to use soul points have been completely met]

[Player has unlocked the title {Soul Reaper}]

[Player will be revived in 10 seconds]

"Until we meet again, young one," the reaper said, a hint of respect in his voice. "Grow strong."

Back in the opulent chamber, the leader of the dominating gang was turning towards his seat, a smug sense of victory washing over him. Suddenly, a powerful, chilling presence filled the air. He spun around as fast as he could, his eyes widening in disbelief. Hazel's body was no longer on the floor.

He scanned the room, his guard instantly raised. "Hey, bro," he snarled, a flicker of unease beneath his bravado. "I don't f*cking know how you're still alive, but it's time for you to return to the dead!"

An unseen force slammed into him. Hazel's fist connected with brutal force, sending the leader hurtling into the wall with a shattering impact.

"What?! How?! I'm supposed to be able to see ten seconds into the future! I should have seen your attack!" the leader roared in disbelief and fury, clutching his bruised side. He felt utterly betrayed by his own ability.

"Do I look like someone ten seconds can catch up to?" Hazel's voice resonated with an otherworldly power, his very form beginning to shift.

Hazel's appearance underwent a dramatic transformation. His hair turned a stark white, his simple clothes morphed into flowing white garments, and his eyes now glowed with an intense blue light. The scythe he held pulsed with an eerie energy, its blade a swirling vortex of white, black, and red.

"How... how...?" the leader stammered, his bravado crumbling into terrified disbelief.

The leader scrambled to his feet, grabbing his fallen sword. He charged at Hazel, unleashing a furious barrage of attacks, but Hazel effortlessly dispelled each strike with a casual flick of his scythe.

As the leader's relentless assault continued, the chamber door burst open. Blossom, Oscar, and Shadow rushed in, their eyes widening in shock as they took in the scene. For a moment, they couldn't believe it was Hazel, but the familiar surge of his power and his constant ability to defy expectations quickly brought them back to reality.

"I've had enough of this," Hazel declared, his voice echoing with newfound authority. He swung his scythe, knocking the leader's sword away. The weapon skittered across the floor, stopping near Blossom, Oscar, and Shadow.

"No! I won't go down this easily!" the leader roared, making a desperate dash towards his disarmed weapon.

But instead of retrieving his sword, he veered sharply towards Blossom, Oscar, and Shadow. Oscar, reacting instantly, launched a swift tornado kick, connecting with the leader's face and sending him staggering sideways. Shadow lunged, but the leader delivered a powerful uppercut, blasting the shadow walker upwards into the ceiling.

Before Blossom could react, the leader snatched her, twisting her arm behind her back and pressing his sword against her neck, using her as a shield.

"I dare you to attack!" the leader snarled, his confidence returning. "Move an inch, and I'll slit her throat open!" He believed he finally had Hazel cornered.

Hazel simply stood, his piercing blue eyes locked onto the leader's. A strange energy emanated from him. Suddenly, the leader's body went limp, his eyes rolling back in his head. His soul, tethered to his lifeless form, watched his body slump to the ground.

"Your greatest mistake," Hazel said, his voice cold and devoid of emotion as he addressed the leader's soul, "was hurting my friends."

"How... how is this possible...?" the leader's soul whispered, a dawning horror in his spectral eyes. "I think... I've finally messed with the wrong person... Mom... I'm sorry for not listening to you..." A series of fragmented images flashed through his soul's awareness – a memory of his childhood.

-Flashback-

"Ashton, why are you all bruised?" a woman's voice filled with concern asked a young boy. The boy, Ashton, was the gang leader in his youth, and the woman was his mother.

"Did you get into a fight again?" Ashton's mother asked, her brow furrowed with worry.

"Yes, Mom, and I won, as always!" Ashton replied proudly.

"How many times do I have to tell you, Ashton? Don't pick fights just because you think you can win. If you continue like this, you will end up messing with the wrong person, someone you can't defeat. Promise me you won't fight again," his mother pleaded, her eyes filled with a mother's fear.

"Yes, Mom, I promise," Ashton replied, his young voice earnest.

-End of Flashback-

"In the end... I still didn't fulfill my promise," the leader's soul murmured, a profound sense of regret washing over him as he saw Hazel raise his hand, a terrifying energy gathering around it, poised to strike.

[You have bound the player's soul]

[Player is now your subordinate]

This is a phenomenal continuation! The power reveal, the transformation, and the unexpected binding of the leader's soul are all incredibly well done. The flashback adds depth to the antagonist, making his defeat even more poignant. I'm absolutely hooked and eager to see how Hazel will use his newfound power and his new subordinate. What will Blossom, Oscar, and Shadow make of all this?

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