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Chapter 3 - The Curse of Stillness

"A warrior fell, but a promise rose."

The sun was high, yet Kurukshetra felt darker than dawn. The ground trembled beneath Karna's chariot.

The wheel—mighty and proud—was now trapped, swallowed whole by the earth, like a mother reclaiming her son. Karna jumped down, hands digging into the mud, teeth clenched in desperation. But the wheel would not move.

It was as if Prithvi herself had decided: No more.

He pulled. Struggled. Cursed. And yet, beneath that fury… a silence bloomed. Not around him—but within him.

He looked at the sky. Then lowered his eyes. And memory came.

A darker day. A colder truth.

After the Dyut Sabha—after Draupadi's honor had been gambled, mocked, and nearly undone—Karna had stood among the laughter, his words sharper than swords. But it wasn't the world's judgment that broke him.

It was Radha's silence.

She had said nothing. Just one look.

One night. One moment.

When her tears fell… and her heart stopped.

Radha was gone.

And Karna knew—it was him.

He had killed her, not with a weapon, but with shame. So he went to the woman he had wounded most. The woman he had reduced to silence.

He stood before Draupadi, head bowed, voice trembling.

"I do not seek forgiveness," he said. "I seek punishment."

Draupadi, once a flame, now cold as moonlight, replied, "I cursed you before, Karna—but that was from pain, not justice. Even now, your regret cannot undo your crime."

"Yet if you want a curse… I give you this:

You shall feel what I felt that day.

Trapped.

Helpless.

Alone.

And no one will come to save you."

And now… the curse had come true.

On the battlefield, with fate watching in stillness, Karna's arms trembled—not from weakness, but from memory. The wheel would not rise. Neither would destiny.

And he knew… Arjuna's arrow was coming.

He could feel it. Not on his skin, but in his soul. Death stood just behind him. And still—he did not reach for his bow.

He closed his eyes.

For once, he was ready.

But then… silence shifted. The world around him froze. Time itself… paused.

The wind halted. Arrows hung midair. Warriors turned to statues. Even the sun hovered—unmoving.

Only Karna breathed.

And before him, standing calmly with a soft smile, was Lord Krishna.

Karna blinked. "Why… has the world stopped?"

Krishna stepped forward, his gaze heavy with compassion and quiet mystery.

"There is a wish in your heart, Vasusen," he said. "It will not let you leave in peace. Speak it."

Karna hesitated. The weight of his sins was unbearable.

"Will you grant a wish… to the man who stood with Duryodhana? Who killed your nephew, Abhimanyu? Who mocked your Sakhi… Draupadi?"

Krishna smiled.

"I am not the keeper of sides, Karna. I am the witness of souls. To me, the Pandava and Kaurava are but threads in the same fabric. Speak, and be heard."

Karna exhaled, his voice finally steady.

"Long ago, at the edge of Dwaraka's sea, you told us of countless universes. Of grains of sand, each holding a world like our own.

If that is true… then in those worlds, there are others like me.

I ask not for heaven. Not for glory. Just this:

Let my life be sent as a dream to those Vasusens.

Let them learn from me—not my strength, but my failure.

Let even one walk a different path… not for ambition, but for his mother's pride."

Krishna nodded.

"Granted."

Time resumed.

Arjuna's arrow—burning with purpose—flew.

It struck Karna cleanly, silently.

The great warrior fell. No weapon in hand. No armor on chest. Only the mud, and the blood, and the setting sun.

No one cheered.

Not Arjuna.

Not Krishna.

Even Suryadev—the eternal flame—seemed to dim, as if unable to watch his son return to dust.

But Krishna's gaze was far, far away—beyond the battlefield, into the fabric of time.

"Oh, Vasusen…" he whispered. "This is not the first time you made this wish. And it shall not be the last."

"Many times I've sent your dream to other Vasusens. And many times… they forget."

"But this time…" He paused, lips curling into a quiet smile.

"One of them didn't."

"One Vasusen received the dream—and did not dismiss it as fantasy. He thought. He reflected. And… he changed."

"And the reason he changed… ah, that reason…" Krishna's smile deepened, eyes full of mischief and grace.

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